A Cold Day in Florida

A Cold Day in Florida

326 Reads 6 Votes 2 Part Story
Amber By UnofficiallyAmber Updated Dec 24, 2010

They've been together for a year now, and she was sure they were perfect and happy, but he was keeping a dark secret. He was in some sort of trouble and had to leave immediately, and the only bit of information he left her was the reason he had to go and a promise to return for her one day. She lost her one true love. 
     Lately it's been cold and windy, unusual weather for September. could the odd Florida weather be the key to his location?

xylophone_x xylophone_x Feb 12, 2011
hmm i like it but, it could use a little workk...but is is really gud
UnofficiallyAmber UnofficiallyAmber Dec 29, 2010
@sophiie21 Haha :) I was actually writting a chapter when I got off track and went on FB and saw your post. I was like NO WAY!!! :D
sunflowerrgirll sunflowerrgirll Dec 29, 2010
This is really good. No lie. It's so mysterious right now. It's like you have no idea what's going on, you know? I like itt:D keep writing girll;)
UnofficiallyAmber UnofficiallyAmber Dec 24, 2010
@Abi_Kirk86 yeah,I'm not good at synopsis's...s (???) I agree it needs fixing pronto :)
AE_KIrk AE_KIrk Dec 24, 2010
Hmm, interesting start to a story, though may I just put past that your synopsis needs a little spice to it. I mean this is a good way. Garh, don't kill me! ^^
                              The synopsis doesn't say what the story is about so not many people are going to understand what you're writing...Just an FYI.
                              
                              Abi