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Leave Me

Leave Me

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❦ k h u s h i ❦ By aestheticsoul101 Updated Mar 14

❝You're beautiful,❞ he breathed, as he brushed a strand of hair behind my ear, causing chills to go up my spine.
        ❝Don't,❞ I whispered, struggling to keep the tears from spilling out of eyes. I reached out to stop his hands, closing my eyes as one solitary tear ran down my cheek.  
        His mesmerized smile morphed into a sad one as he cupped my face in his sturdy hands. ❝Let me in. I won't hurt you.❞
        I shook my head vigorously, wishing he'd simply go away before I broke down in front of him.
        He murmured, ❝Let me love you,❞ before he locked his lips firmly onto mine.  
                   Angelina Wilson has encountered thousands of problems in her seventeen years of life. Logan Castellanos was one of them. But unlike the thousands of problems that pestered her mind, she didn't want to get rid of this one. 
        Then there is Logan. 
                   Logan Castellanos has flirted with thousands of girls during his lifetime. Angelina was one of them. But unlike the thousands of girls that he had flirted with, he wasn't going to let this one go. Oh no, not until the day he died. 
                   But both are scared of the strong feelings they hold for each other. The farther apart the two distanced themselves, the closer their invisible force pulled them together. 
                   Will they finally put their fears past them and get together? Or will an even stronger force get to work and overpower their love?

Awwww I'm already in love with this story *happy tears* 😭❤❤❤
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aestheticxlly_ aestheticxlly_ Nov 06, 2016
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                              I took my time updating and made sure to add as much original things and ideas that add up to the plot and strengthen it.
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