The Hot Bad Boy & Me

The Hot Bad Boy & Me

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FiftyShadesOfRed By TheVampireWriter Updated Feb 14

"'I care about you,' he said, with a smirk on his face. 
      'I don't care about you.' I replied, trying to show no hesitation. 
      'I want to be with you,' he continued. 
      'I don't want to be with you,' I fired back, keeping eye contact. 
      'I love you.'  I stood there, rooted to my spot. Come on, tell him that you hate him. Come on. 
      I looked down, finally breaking eye contact. 'I don't love you.' But we both knew that was a lie." 
      ***
      Meet Angelina Wilson. While her name may mean, 'angel,' she's anything but. Being sarcastic, courageous, and feisty, she is definitely not your average schoolgirl. She's a good girl turned bad and she undoubtedly has zero regrets. 
      Next up, Logan Castellanos. 
      He has a bad playboy rep which he plans to carry out until the end of senior year. Arrogant, cocky, and attractive, he can get anything he wants, with the snap of his fingers. No one has seen the soft side of Logan, except Angelina that is.
      In a spur-of-the-moment, the two meet and save each other from their drowning sorrows. But, were they saved, only to drown again? Who knew that their brief encounter could turn into something so big? 
      
      Read on to find out more!

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TheNightCatcher TheNightCatcher Nov 06, 2016
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