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VENAROM- remnants of a hidden past.

VENAROM- remnants of a hidden past.

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zaria By ZARIAKELVIN Updated Feb 13

Highest ranking  #9 in fantasy (30/9/2016). 
      #FantasyContest2016
      
      What would you do if your mom disappears?
      
      What would you do if you found a note saying  run away?
      
      As for me, I don't know, 
      
      I don't even know whether the things happening are true.
      
      I don't want to believe them.
      
       So I will ignore them as much as I can.
      
      Holding myself together, so that I don't break.
      
      I will just pretend that I don't care .
      
      Even though I continuously asked without a single answer in sight.There was no way out and no one even cared to know if  I was fine with it.I just had to pretend and continue pretending until the end.
      Leaving  a normal world behind for
      a world filled with magic, bringing danger to my door.
      
      A place where powers exist but their users are hunted down like rabid dogs.A different reality  where I could not die but everyone around me faded away at some point. A domain where I was supreme but had to still remain hidden. Fire, Water, Earth, Wind and light all at my service but are they useful ? 
      When I don't even know how to use them.
      
      I don't want to be a part of any of this I only want to protect the one person who stood beside me when I was left alone my only friend who left her everything for my sake.
      
      This is what I thought when I first met them the tribe with only kids in it. The tribe of my kind which was called VENAROM.
      The cover is done by @elphadora
    
    Copyright © 2016 zariakelvin, Zaria Kelvin

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NotJodi NotJodi Oct 11, 2016
 #GrimReads intense start. A little vague, but given the fact it's a prologue that doesn't matter. It actually helps in some way.
                              
                              P.S. My favorite bit was you describing Zan. That gave so much to the character without over explaining things. I loved it! XD
Old-Tailed-Fox Old-Tailed-Fox Oct 10, 2016
Interesting start I didn't get much on what was happening but it interested me to keep going. 
                              
                              Nothing critical to say yet. But you have my attention.
Demmie_Lei Demmie_Lei Oct 10, 2016
Interesting beginning. Really quick, which was nice, but could use a bit more details added along with it. Facial features or maybe even the environment would be nice. Still... really good for a prologue.
ZARIAKELVIN ZARIAKELVIN Sep 24, 2016
@m_bell :) Thanks. 
                              
                              Gaaah I don't know how many times I told thanks to you.
m_bell m_bell Sep 24, 2016
 #GrimReads
                              Intriguing prologue! I like that we still don't know much about the world just yet as it makes us eager to read on. :)
AlexisBeard AlexisBeard Aug 19, 2016
I see you've changed this! It's good, very coarse and angry.