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Starship Walker

Starship Walker

85.7K Reads 5K Votes 29 Part Story
Andrew McBurnie By AndrewMcBurnie Completed

By foot across the galaxy: Walkers transport starships across interstellar space, but their abilities are rare. Few people have the mental talents to control the weird quantum technology that powers a star-drive. When a mysterious force disables the two Walkers on board the Xinglong Hao, novice Walker Gillian Berry is thrust into the role before her training is complete. Several thousand passengers now depend on her. But she is becoming distracted by alien thoughts and urges that she can't understand.

kasross kasross Sep 07, 2016
Cool! This seems like a story worth following. Hope the rest is as good as the beginning!!
FAHyatt FAHyatt Sep 11, 2016
A good hook, and good use of dialog. Cadence is good,  with none of the excessive use  one finds often with narrative.  Good discription, and active voice. Kudos.
chocfudgeO chocfudgeO Nov 12, 2015
I like Gillian's child-like enthusiasm. :) Shame the grim voiced guy is gonna be a dampener...
chocfudgeO chocfudgeO Nov 12, 2015
Wow, your descriptions of the mask are excellent. Almost feel like I'm experiencing it with her - so suffocating! :O
Its_Me_Tony_Stark Its_Me_Tony_Stark Jun 30, 2015
I think this is the best book for scifi readers, atleast till now
JaMartin1 JaMartin1 May 27, 2015
Nice start, I am drawn to the characters and look forward to seeing how your plot develops.  This is very creative and original.