Counting the Stars

Counting the Stars

2.3K Reads 38 Votes 13 Part Story
Nickie By TotallyNickie Completed

Two broken people. 9 frat boys. One house. 
Jace and Ripley both live in insanity. Both have lost their parents, both are fighting to put everything together. Ripley starts putting everything together, only for one painful situation to rip it all down. Jace is just focused on his band, throwing everything into his music. Is he the only one who sees the situation Ripley is in? Is he the only one who can pull her out of it, save her from her own denial? They need each other more than they know, and together they'll Count the Stars.

TheusernameIwanted TheusernameIwanted Jan 29, 2012
EDIT! It flows, but it could be way better, If you DO edit then send me the link, I'll critique it then.
TotallyNickie TotallyNickie Jan 29, 2012
@leireads  Thank you!! It gets easier to remember the characters I promise! Haha :)
SirJaaja SirJaaja Dec 23, 2011
hey,
                              i read your story and it was very intruiging and interesting!
                              you have a talent for writing. follow it k?
                              peace
TotallyNickie TotallyNickie Dec 23, 2011
@MarineLynn Thanks! I know it's really overdone but I plan on adding it's own unique spin to it. @wolfsister  Thank you!
MarineLynn MarineLynn Dec 23, 2011
It's about cliche, especially living with lots of boys. One tip is that you should use more description.
BlurryWords BlurryWords Dec 21, 2011
Really engaging start. I read through the whole thing without losing interest once. I love the name Jace (I'm a Mortal Instruments fan :P) and I really want to get to know his character more, he seems pretty interesting!