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Please, remember

Please, remember

545 Reads 23 Votes 3 Part Story
NostalgicWish By NostalgicWish Updated Dec 23, 2010

19 year old Kalden lives with his only sister, Eloise. They live a happy, normal life until a man from the past comes back to take Eloise.
Why is this man taking her? She is Kalden's sister and they have no right to take her away from Kalden...Or there is something, something that Kalden is hiding from Eloise.

Hazulgirl Hazulgirl Dec 23, 2010
OOHH 0_0 I can't wait to read more!!! Great detail! Keep writing :)
NostalgicWish NostalgicWish Dec 23, 2010
                              thanks, but i'm not as talented as blackpinkviolets01. XD
NostalgicWish NostalgicWish Dec 22, 2010
He's a boy.
                              It's Kalden's POV i'm using here. 
                              At the prologue was Eloise's.
NostalgicWish NostalgicWish Dec 22, 2010
@myrimystx where? thw one with the "my only family" part? O.o
                              oh. and thanks for the honest criticism. it'll help me improve. :)
NeverShoutAlex NeverShoutAlex Dec 22, 2010
The part before this was amazingly cute, and this one is mysterious but nice, i love it :D