dark secrets

dark secrets

862 Reads 15 Votes 1 Part Story
Fadzai By fafa1122 Updated Dec 04, 2010

Zoe has always been the good girl at school. But latley shes been feeling strange and isnt living up to her reputaton. the fact that she's attreacted to two bad boys does not help her either. She knows Marcus is hiding something. But what if she is to? something dark hidden deep in her memory. Zoe begins too wrap herslef in her own lies when she refuses to accept the truth. Like they say once you sart lying, you get so wrapped up in them its hard to find your way back.

Justin is the schools Hottie. He has everything he wants. Fame, popularity, money and girls. But when Zoe steps into his life and shows him the other side to life he beggins to wonder if what he has enough for him.

Marcus is the bad boy. he always has been. Like any other bad boy he hides stuff. except his secret is darker than most. so why does he feel the need to tell Zoe what hes hiding?

ACRL37 ACRL37 May 19, 2011
This isn't a bad start....I would just suggest cutting down the number of lines from Romeo & Juliet. Nice job =) 
Phamous Phamous Feb 24, 2011
Haha the last part was funny, i love it. Its very interesting and i'm desperate to read more! Voted.
mercy123454321 mercy123454321 Jan 07, 2011
This story sounds good, sorry i took so long to read it.
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fafa1122 fafa1122 Dec 31, 2010
@peanutty11  :L 
                              he's a famous guy! lol
                              i agree it would be really wierd tho  ;)
fafa1122 fafa1122 Dec 20, 2010
                              thanks for reading my story, your advice is realy helpful. yea im not to sure whether or not i want to make it a suspense or murder but at the moment i think its going in a kind of teen love triangle romance 
                              anyway thanks again  :)
                              p.s ill make sure i do xx
fafa1122 fafa1122 Dec 04, 2010
this is the begining  :) love you all this is my first story :)) :L xx