A tragic past leads to amnesia in the form of protection in Carr. A year later, she runs away and meets Jared, but he says that they used to know each other. Is Jared really a part of Carr's unfortunate past?
@mia_culpa9889 thnks I can always use some critisizm. That bugs me too.
Woah a powerful story this is it really pulls on the emotional strings!!! Read my Chairsniffa Critiques for some tips on how to make your story shine but great emotive power!!! You have got a real puppy between these lines! (for what I mean by puppy you will have to read Chairsniffa critiques:)
Nice work this!!!! Your doing great lol I read the fourth part and should have started here!!! Sorreee:(