Free Wind

Free Wind

12.7K Reads 475 Votes 34 Part Story
Crystal Santacruz By Santacruz23 Completed

It is 1829 in Georgia, United States and there is much tension with the Native Americans for land. Rosette Johnson, half white and half Cherokee, lives with her grandfather, a greedy landowner and despises the native people, and also lives with her older cousin, who is nice to Rosette. Although Rosette is half Cherokee, she is known to be a great beauty and has many admirers. One is Corporal George Dickson, who is known for his brutality against the natives. The other is a Cherokee Free Wind, a fierce warrior fighting for his people's land. Rosette will face many troubles with laws being placed, knowing her true identity and being with her love.

Highest Ranked: #51 Historical Fiction

Ocanada_ Ocanada_ Jul 05
Great first chapter.  You did a nice job of introducing the main character.  From the get-go, the reader knows Anrette isn't a cookie-cutter fifteen-year-old.  Good work.  :)
D_M_Smith D_M_Smith Nov 08
Some constructive criticism for you...try to keep to one tense. In this paragraph you switch between present and past. Otherwise it's a great first paragraph and I'm super excited to keep reading!
Thank you for the dedications! ☺ ✍ This story has a lot of potential. Great opening chapter.
jisha96 jisha96 Nov 05
I don't know why b8 I feel the picture is of Russian president Vladimir putin dressed as a young girl😆😂
I was looking for a story in a similar time as mine for a long time. Thanks a lot for providing it! Great introduction :-)