Premonition

Premonition

1.9K Reads 26 Votes 1 Part Story
Courtney By courtneymo96 Completed

Premonition is an intriguing story about a 17 year old girl, Jillian Nicole, who sneaks out of the house in the middle of the night, to go to a party down the street. While she's there, someone slips a drug into her drink, and the rest of the night is quite a blur. When her mom finds out what happened that night, she becomes furious, and sends Jillian to Scotts, her alcoholic father. When Jillian gets in the car with her father, she realizes he is highly intoxicated, and should not be driving. As she pleaded to Scott to stop driving, he doesnt listen, and smashes into an ongoing 18-wheeler. Read more to see what happens next in the suspensful and breathtaking story, Premonition.

Uhhhh no please add a chapter explaining that she had woken up and had been given another chance
blackw0lf blackw0lf Feb 22
PLEASE MAKE MORE! I NEED TO HAVE MORE! And soooooo sad!😭😭 I am not kidding when I said I cried
AaronWest830 AaronWest830 Apr 07, 2011
well i thought that it was a pile of crap and you need to forg about writing books and get  LIFE!!!!!!!!!
greeneyedgurl greeneyedgurl Dec 24, 2010
Hey:) I really like your story so far!! The only thing really is there's a lot of spaces but otherwise it's great!
HeidiVale HeidiVale Dec 23, 2010
You have a really amazing way with words. A first I was like: what is this? a really huge poem? But then I continued reading it and I really loved it and understand why it is in the form of a poem. Loved it really.
courtneymo96 courtneymo96 Dec 21, 2010
@nicolle1496 haha,  thanks so much for your oppinion 
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