Flipped Side (Hiatus)

Flipped Side (Hiatus)

1.4K Reads 94 Votes 2 Part Story
H I A T U S By lowkeystyles Updated Mar 18

Cover by: @redxwritingxhood

  • adventure
  • craziness
  • crazy
  • depressing
  • dreams
  • fun
  • funnyjokes
  • funnymoments
  • happiness
  • love
  • random
  • romance
  • suicidal
  • teendrama
  • teenfiction
  • wattpad
  • wattys2017
  • weird
  • wild
  • zaynmalik
lunarlevana_ lunarlevana_ Jun 16, 2017
Hi! Could you check out my story Dysmorphia please? I'd be happy to return the favour!
simbaze simbaze Mar 08, 2017
Damn, this start was so intense. I'm already crying.  😢 😢 😢
- - Dec 30, 2016
This is a really well written start to the story! I didn't even notice I started reading the next chapter until I finished it, your story got me hooked that fast!
chaosandcreativity chaosandcreativity Dec 22, 2016
I think it should read:
                              
                              '... So far that before I knew it I was under my kitchen sink'
chaosandcreativity chaosandcreativity Dec 22, 2016
'I felt like I was being stabbed in the stanch repeatedly." 
                              
                              I think that the 'yet this seemed worse' is a little confusing. If you want to keep it I think you should clarify on what you're trying to say.
chaosandcreativity chaosandcreativity Dec 22, 2016
I think it should read:
                              
                              'The last thing I remember him saying was a raspy "I love you." His eyes then flutter close and everything I ever believed to be true was then simultaneously thrown out the window.'