I've always written reviews and given people advice on how to, but I want to write it down. I'll go through different subjects as I see fit and tell you my advice on it, or the ways you could improve it, etc. Like dialogue.
If you're struggling with something I might be able to help you, just leave requests as a comment. I'm also willing to help more specific requests through message.
KEEP IN MIND I AM AN AMATEUR. I've been writing for five years and am soon to get into writing a novel, however.