icouldnotthinkofanameforthreeyears

icouldnotthinkofanameforthreeyears

510 Reads 72 Votes 17 Part Story
Jacqui By jjacquio Completed

Collin and Lauren have secrets that can get them kicked out. Collin is gay and Lauren is pregnant. She's pregnant with Collin's bully's child, but has the bully changes his feeling changed towards Collin, maybe a bit too much?


hello reader, this was my first book and i've always thought to rewrite it but it's very hard, okay?? i've fallen in love with these characters, they're like my children but the fucking writing "style". if this book gets lots of reads (which i'm not expecting) then i will possibly rewrite it. 

sorry, in advance.

JUSTA WARNING THERE IS NOT A GOOD ENDING

  • boyxboy
  • drama
  • gay
  • mature
  • pregnant
  • random
SweertRyanScarfRoss SweertRyanScarfRoss Jul 20, 2016
I havent started reading yet but by the descripition your a very talented young 12 year old for a wrighter, I can see that you may have a future of making books for yourself.
SweertRyanScarfRoss SweertRyanScarfRoss Jul 20, 2016
Also, just a tip, you only make the "closet" like that one time, also you might want to indent your first paragraph, I dont, but for fancy stuff, for the future, per chapter.