Our Eyes

Our Eyes

513 Reads 18 Votes 4 Part Story
Hmm, that's secret for now By Vampire_Freak987 Updated Dec 29, 2010

Maci is a water nymph, her father king of the water nymph, but she doesn't feel like she belongs. Something is urging her to the surface. She runs away from home and gets stuck on the surface. She has only a few days before she dies if she doesn't get back. 
 Will she get back in time?

PamMosier PamMosier Jan 10, 2011
I Love it! It's a different story from most. I can't wait to read more!
pirate2010 pirate2010 Dec 21, 2010
Wow this story is just like little mermaid, but very good. I like it. Thank you so much for dedicating this part to me. You are very sweet. Please continue and if there is anything else i can help you with, let me know. Always there to help. 
xxDreamyxx xxDreamyxx Dec 21, 2010
I love it....its awesome! I'm going to read next part :D Thanks for the dedication :)
Willforcebauer Willforcebauer Dec 20, 2010
i love it amazing keep writing more never give up never stop its edgy and more importantly iam hooked.