These [poems and short stories] are from the heart and head.
wow! haha, thanks very much!
yeah, the whole thing was an assignment and i had a word limit. do you think i should edit the end and see how it goes?
the change is basically on how i saw the hospital from the outside, then when my dad was in there, i saw it from the inside.
This is powerful in an eerie sense, but I sense great writing skill :) I shall read on :)