I'm Already Dead

I'm Already Dead

6.8K Reads 119 Votes 5 Part Story
hazeybug By hazeybug Updated Jun 10, 2011

Maddie is just an average girl who happened to get pulled into a series of events that changed her life forever. When she comes home from school to find her computer talking to her, she agrees to terms unknown to her or she dies. The computer makes her follow a list of instructions, to which she has to follow or there will be consiquences worse than her wildest nightmares. Who is the computer? and why did it choose her?

  • already
  • computer
  • dead
Tortastic Tortastic May 24, 2012
Hello, so i just read your book and loved it! you really need to finish uploading it as i need to know what happens or i think i might die. thankyou. <3
Mysteriouswriter Mysteriouswriter Feb 25, 2011
So hazeybug, it asctually appears on the hompage...thats something!
CarmaStories CarmaStories Feb 22, 2011
This is really good, would anyone mind reading my first book I started on, its a thriller
trishthewriter trishthewriter Feb 17, 2011
I like your story and what you did to draw your readers in. You hooked the readers and kept them interested. Just be sure to clean up your grammar and punctuation and such so your comments are about your story and not your mechanics. I voted. 
Unknown2me Unknown2me Jan 27, 2011
@seg1234 Oh wow, I have no clue what I read.  I must have read the beginning and thought "day" was "dad" or something.  Sorry for the confusion!
seg1234 seg1234 Jan 27, 2011
@Unknown2me : what do you mean the dad died ...???? :/ there isnt a dad that died in the story :/