Yandere!Link x Male!Reader

Yandere!Link x Male!Reader

25.8K Reads 658 Votes 7 Part Story
GamingFudanshi By GamingFudanshi Completed

Out of all people he noticed you and he won't let you go

Cover is not mine it belongs to it's rightful owner

  • gore
  • legendofzelda
  • semelink
  • ukemalereader
  • yandere
  • yaoi
- - Jun 16, 2017
To give some constructive critisim, you should avoid swapping point of views. It works if we see another character's viewpoint in a separate chapter, but repeatedly stating who is speaking breaks the immersion. Practice makes perfect though.
Ok so the pov has switched 4 times in the last 5 paragraphs. You don't need to do that. It would honestly be pretty easy to rewrite this into a single pov.
LazinessCookieGod LazinessCookieGod Aug 18, 2017
IT SAYS IN THE EXACT SAME SENTENCE THAT LINK WAS MISTAKEN. MY GOD.
Crystalline_Circus Crystalline_Circus Sep 12, 2017
That's what I thought and I left the story and then came back to finish the paragraph
AlaskanWolf88 AlaskanWolf88 Aug 19, 2017
I thought we were a dude? It says male reader in the title...
PikachuOfAlola PikachuOfAlola Dec 19, 2017
I just started this book and Im in the first sentence. *sigh* let's begin.