Never Let Me Go × Completed ×

Never Let Me Go × Completed ×

8.7K Reads 3.6K Votes 24 Part Story
иι¢σℓє By Sad_Vampire_ Completed

Warning: This might make you laugh until your stomach hurts and then make you cry your eyes out.


The sound of rain is so peaceful, why isn't our life as peaceful as the sound of rain? 

Why does it have to contradict and be as aggressive as a rainstorm? 

Ren was the boy every girl wanted, the basketball captain, with a perfect body, green eyes, tall, charming and arrogant.

Girls wanted to have him, and boys want to be like him.

His life was pure sunshine.

After a forsaken accident, he still was charming, with a perfect body and surely enough, was still arrogant, but these beautiful green eyes of his, have no longer worked and were hidden behind a pair of Ray-Ban shades ever since ; useless, as he called them.

Thunderstorms and tsunamis represent Ren's entire existence now.

So, Ren is now arrogant, charming , a pessimist and blind, unlike Alexis, who is sweet, beautiful, optimistic and annoying, as he calls her, opposites attract, remember?

Alexis is the sun in Ren's life now. However; Alexis a soft storm that evolves into a tornado soon. 

So to Ren, instead of playing basketball, he works out. Instead of spending his time with a girl, he locks himself in his room and listens to music. He hit the pit of despair.

But Alexis changed everything, she's Ren's sun.

Caden, the current basketball captain, let's just say Caden is Ren before he got blind; the guy every girl wants.

Every girl but Alexis, she wanted the guy who turned the butterflies in her stomach to bulls and cows; Alexis wanted Ren.

Caden is a cloudy sky, caught between sunshine and rain; aimless.

You just don't know if it's gonna rain or not.

What happens when Ren finally is happy again, and finds his eyes to this world, Alexis?

What is the optimistic and hopeful  Alexis hiding?

LucaBelle LucaBelle Sep 04, 2016
Awesome chapter. Nice dialogue, it flowed cohesively and was realistic. I'm loving the characters, Ren and Lexi. Your writing style is descriptive but also enticing. I cannot wait for the next chapter!
Izzy_Winchester1864 Izzy_Winchester1864 Oct 20, 2016
Aww; I always fall for that when my nephew does them 👀😍😂
LittleAussie LittleAussie Dec 06, 2016
Good so far. English isn't your first language though, is it?
axdjames1989 axdjames1989 Aug 24, 2016
Your english is just magnificent! You also have a talent in writing! I fnd it very enjoyable!!
almadukaj almadukaj Oct 03, 2016
I'm already loving this book; I loved the reference to spongebob, and your descriptions of the scenery and people is just amazing!
sintiabibi sintiabibi Dec 31, 2016
It was 7.51K just yesterday literally now its 7.64K  im proud of u ♡