Playing Hard To Get

Playing Hard To Get

464K Reads 4.9K Votes 55 Part Story
Natasha By TashaW Completed

Hurt after her dad left a year ago Katy becomes a sarcastic sometimes vain 17 year old determined to get the guy she wants. This guy is a bad boy and is playing hard to get but Katy will do anything to finally crack his tough exterior and for him to finally admit he loves her too. Now she has him but will it last and will the problems that have haunted her come back and change her? ***Needs editing***

socalgirl22 socalgirl22 Nov 08, 2012
Ur story is awesome! I couldnt stop reading it and i am happy how the story ended. And a sequal would have been nice but thats okay. Reed+Katy
beebsters beebsters May 15, 2012
I always wondered if you were going to make a sequel to this story? Because I would love to read it ;)
sinmagsc sinmagsc Mar 13, 2011
Good opening , I'm gonna read on :) you need to go over the grammar though , it got a little confusing cos of it. Iteration than that, good job :)
TashaW TashaW Feb 13, 2011
@tianajade thanks for reading, I will try to slow it down :)
tianajade tianajade Feb 13, 2011
It's an OK beginning (: I got a little confused though, because most of your dialogue is all next to each other. You need a new line each time you have one of your characters talk. It's a little fast paced, and it needs more description. But over all, it was a good start. Keep writing!
UniqueNotUseful UniqueNotUseful Dec 19, 2010
Interesting, can't wait for the next chapter. Unique writing style, but you have to remember to pay attention to small errors.