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Lisa Immelman By LisaImmelman Updated Mar 18, 2016

It was never supposed to be about making love, it was about sex. It wasn't about feelings, just feeling; touch. Taste. It didn't have to hurt, it didn't have to significant, it didn't need to be named.  Fucking, not loving.

But it wasn't.

If you just edit the grammer, it'd be perfect. You're a great descriptive author!!
muzdreamer17 muzdreamer17 Mar 19, 2016
So I was just looking at different books on wattpad and i came across an intro for a book that was the exact one that yiu have for this book. The "author" is Gavinbotha
irishlucky irishlucky Apr 10, 2016
It doesn't bode well for the author that this book showed up right next to a book on the featured list with the exact same description and characters...that was finished two years ago.
HannahColeman0 HannahColeman0 Aug 08, 2014
I really hope you make it big because you're writing is phenomenal...I actually look to you for inspiration.
ACNichols ACNichols Jun 18, 2014
Dialogue is always a new paragraph unless its the same person speaking.
aprilknox99 aprilknox99 Dec 25, 2013
you need to use paragraphs but other then that, it's great :)