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Lisa Immelman By LisaImmelman Updated Mar 18, 2016

It was never supposed to be about making love, it was about sex. It wasn't about feelings, just feeling; touch. Taste. It didn't have to hurt, it didn't have to significant, it didn't need to be named.  Fucking, not loving.

But it wasn't.

muzdreamer17 muzdreamer17 Mar 19, 2016
So I was just looking at different books on wattpad and i came across an intro for a book that was the exact one that yiu have for this book. The "author" is Gavinbotha
irishlucky irishlucky Apr 10, 2016
It doesn't bode well for the author that this book showed up right next to a book on the featured list with the exact same description and characters...that was finished two years ago.
HannahColeman0 HannahColeman0 Aug 08, 2014
I really hope you make it big because you're writing is phenomenal...I actually look to you for inspiration.
ACNichols ACNichols Jun 18, 2014
Dialogue is always a new paragraph unless its the same person speaking.
aprilknox99 aprilknox99 Dec 25, 2013
you need to use paragraphs but other then that, it's great :)
Princess1Peach Princess1Peach Sep 29, 2013
Oh my god!  I am having a crazy fan girl moment, but the description for your story is so good, and so is this first chapter.  I love your writing style, it is very edgy.