The Rebellion (Discontinued)

The Rebellion (Discontinued)

653K Reads 6.3K Votes 44 Part Story
Brooklyn By BrooklynTuesday Completed

This is an old story I'll eventually rewrite. This draft is from about five years ago and there's a lot I'll change in the newer edition. So read it if you like, but be aware that there will be no sequel that fits this story.

One second. That's all it takes to change the course of a persons life, and when you're dealing with people who have the ability to manipulate time and space, that second is beyond valuable.
Remember this and remember it well, nothing is what it seems, and in a world such as this, it's kill or be killed, succeed of die trying. This isn't a love story, this isn't make believe. This is Fear. Hate. War. Vengeance.

Kissmypoop Kissmypoop Jun 23, 2014
No offense but I don't like reading long paragraphs it takes to long and it's all a lot of words and no spacing
cheekypie1999 cheekypie1999 May 14, 2013
Oh my gosh I didn't think you could have made the story any better than it was before but I love it!!!!!
Chancelol Chancelol Oct 26, 2012
I love the concept of this and so far, from what I've read, you've pulled it off very nicely. Can't wait to read more :)
FrankOShea FrankOShea Jul 31, 2011
Hey, I like the cover. That's a katana she wields, isn't it? I think you never say what type of swords they use. Would you mind mentioning it in Dark as Night? Thank you!
carpe-di3m carpe-di3m Jul 24, 2011
WOW, i love your book cover! It lead me to reading this amazing story and WOW, i was not disappointed! Voting this and Saving it to my library! :D
CanWePretend CanWePretend May 27, 2011
:O this is such a cool idea! I love it! :D 
                              Sounds damn awesome and can't wait to read mroe of it....may take me a while..hahaha. Seriously awesome!