My Two Alphas

My Two Alphas

51.6K Reads 1.9K Votes 20 Part Story
TeeAnne By MrsGboys4ever Updated Nov 12

Laney is 17 Years old and a werewolf, a accident when she was young made her lose her wolf. Josh is Laneys boyfriend and soon to be Alpha. When Laney is almost 18 and her wolf still hasn't returned many wonder if Josh is her true mate. Laneys father asks the State Alpha for help to bring his daughters wolf back, but Will he want more from Laney? Laney ends up stuck between two Alphas, and a secret the whole town has hidden from her changes her life forever.

 

© 2013 This Book is protected under copyright laws and is owned and written by me Tammie or otherwise known as Mrs.Gboys4ever. Any violation of these laws will be prosecuted to the fullest extent of the law. 8/14/2013

MrsGboys4ever MrsGboys4ever Feb 19, 2015
@ILOVEWOLFVES Working on the update. I am writing 4 stories so this hasn't been updated yet plus I had computer issues. So hence why not many new comments recently. But This will be updated within the week and back to regular updates and readers
LiteralFantasy LiteralFantasy Oct 05, 2013
Your grammar and writing style could use some improvement but otherwise good plot line
Not_The_Normal_Teen Not_The_Normal_Teen Sep 22, 2013
For me to straighten AND blow dry my hair it would take me almost three hours... No joke.
DrSocks DrSocks Aug 19, 2013
had a very gripping intro. again as i commented on the other, just some indentions and separations between paragraphs :)
                              
                              good length just a few grammar things but easily fixable. nice job :)
jimrileyenlight jimrileyenlight Aug 17, 2013
It was the least I could do, given your heartfelt comments on the opening chapters of my book. Let\'s try to find time soon to get deeper into each others work.
Runitback Runitback Aug 17, 2013
This is pretty good! Maybe a tad dry, but I was expecting nothing more from it. You were missing a LOT of punctuation and a few missing letters though! I\'d take a look at that. Other than that, it\'s pretty interesting and when I have time, I think I\'ll continue on. :)