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ONE STEP DEEPER.

ONE STEP DEEPER.

399 Reads 74 Votes 9 Part Story
clumsymind9 By clumsymind9 Updated Jan 14

Thanks to @hereiam for this beautiful cover. 

#154 in poetry on 9/10/2016
#133 in poetry on 15/10/2016
 My short poem collection. Come and be a part of my world. 

clumsymind

Vortex7 Vortex7 Mar 30
Simple and beautiful. Let me live and teach me how to live. That basically condenses to 'Love me as I am'. 
                              I felt that the rhymes were somewhat forced at some instances. Also, take note of the length of sentences because they can make rhyming scheme a fuss. Other than that, a job well done. 🔥
hereiam hereiam Oct 05, 2016
Nice rhymes! And i like the imagery, 'like whole earth is burned by sun in summer'
EdwinJohnA EdwinJohnA Jan 13
The title catches my special attention...
                              I have a poem Dreams and Life :-)
clumsymind9 clumsymind9 Jun 27, 2016
Thats just rhyming. I tried it other way but this way it looked better to me.
Prasahni Prasahni Jan 27
The rate of female foeticide is more in our country , 
                              
                              Why they don't think of ur poetry 
                              
                              Kyu unke pankh ko aane se pahle kaat dete hain 
                              
                              Wah jis uchaiyo ko choona chahti hai samaj wale yah kah ladki hai kaise rahegi akeli ankush laga dete hain.....😢😢
Luckyzebu Luckyzebu Jul 04, 2016
U just live
                              U just dream 
                              Ur work keep peple hopes high
                              
                              U preach like nightingale
                              Ur words r power for depressed nd pale
                              U just live 
                              U just dream
                              😘😍