Debt to the Mafia

Debt to the Mafia

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Xgirl_in_the_backX By Xgirl_in_the_backX Updated Feb 09

Alexia Conners is the sweetheart of her town. She's known and loved by all. Never did a droplet of doubt or negativity pass through her mind. 

But, when she finds out a dark family secret about some crazed Mafia business and that her father could be killed for not paying his debt to the most feared man in America, Jackson West, a shadow casts upon her life. 

A day later, this mystery Mafia man shows up at the Conner's Doorstep asking for his payment of $500,000. But when Alexia's father can't afford the payment, Jackson makes threats.

But then his eyes lay upon Alexia, and he knows exactly how Mr.Conners will pay his debt. 

Through his daughter.


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alysa3012 alysa3012 Feb 04
Wtf why can't I see the chapter😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
wr2015 wr2015 Jan 22
Really nice description here. I'm not sure there's enough happening to really catch a reader, though. A bit of mystery or action could help. Perhaps Alexia might have some suspicion about her father which could intrigue the reader. I hope this helps.
texas_is_forever texas_is_forever Nov 09, 2016
Even if he was dangerous and violent, I'd still feel all fluffy inside
Idk what Dutch braids r need 2 search that up 2 the brush ALWAYS brushes RUDELY through my hair its like  bish get me out of this rag