In Love With Her #Watty2016

In Love With Her #Watty2016

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Ellisa Evans By Ellisa_Evans Completed

I smiled at him and then looked at my mom. "Mom, whose engagement party it is?"

Mr. And Mrs.  Onice looked at me in shock. "You didn't told her?" Mr. Onice asked mom.

"No, we thought we might want to surprise her a bit," Mom giggled.

Mrs. Onice smiled at me as she came closer to me and hugged me. Then she touched my cheeks and said, "did you miss Ryan?"

"Yes, I mean, he is my friend," I said.

"So we thought of a way to do something that you won't miss Ryan anymore," she said.

I looked at other suspiciously. Mom started to laugh a little and dad winked at me.

"We thought of making you and Ryan get engage so you wouldn't miss each other anymore. Isn't that a good idea?" She said.

I looked at her in shock. Me and Ryan . . . Engage?

manha_786 manha_786 2 days ago
Woww. What a way to tell the bride to be that she is getting engaged...
zemy-chang zemy-chang Sep 09
Uhm. This ain't look professional to me Author.
                              Professional like 3 piece suit, classic blazer and trousers. Something like that.
                              Not jeans with a chain dangling on it, a white casual top and a baggy jacket!
                              Great effort by the way for writing the story...but it needs thorough  editing.