ummmm it seems kinda plain and blunt but other wise its really good
well im sorry if you think my story is a text message but im not here to pleased everybody..
I hte it when authors hve tht "don't care" attitude, and write like theyt never took English or Language Arts... like i came here to read a story, not a long text message....
i like it!! but it is kind of hard to read with the small errors here and there but i like the plot and setting :D
Cindy was so right slapping that ........
Love it !
Upload more please :))