Born to Shine

Born to Shine

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blackdust By blackdust Completed

Lizzie wakes up from a coma finding out that her parents and her little brother are dead. Her parents always told her that she was destined for fame so three years later Lizzie finds herself working to get to the top. 

She isn't the same after the death and becomes isolated to the world. It is until she meets one boy that makes her life suffer some more.

But what happens when he learns the truth?

chloechloex chloechloex Oct 24, 2013
this is so amazing!!!! I cant wait to get reading on this :)!
blackdust blackdust Aug 14, 2012
@little_lady4 Thank you I'm glad you think so! xD @swimgurl Aw, I didn't mean to make you cry! But I'm glad you loved it! =)
nelinor nelinor Aug 10, 2012
I really like this beginning! adding the title at the end, nice touch haha! :)
blackdust blackdust Apr 07, 2012
@Sabertoothtigress Okay thank you! I'll work on it! Sorry about the late reply by the way! xD
Sabertoothtigress Sabertoothtigress Feb 28, 2012
I think you might want to work on your sentence structure a bit more...almost every sentence is formed the same way. It makes your subconcious bored, which will leak into your concious mind. Try to spice things up more, take literary risks.
Darkest_Revelations Darkest_Revelations Dec 22, 2011
@blackdust Anytime!! I don't plan on giving up supporting you anytime soon ;)