Aarmau lemons

Aarmau lemons

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My account By kailyn_ships Updated Aug 04, 2016

Well this is a Aarmau lemons book and they are mostly going to be one shots

I would probably do what Travis did. Barge and be like"WHAT---is going on here? What did o just walk into?" :3
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CloudsAndAliens CloudsAndAliens Oct 11, 2016
Whenever I See Thrust I Think Of Steven Universe When Holo Pearl Yells "THRUST" And Proofs Pearl 😂🔫
Ilikebekfast Ilikebekfast Jul 31, 2016
I'm going to be very critical. This is not that great. The author used than rather than "then". Another problem I have with the story is it is was to damn fast pace. There really isn't a pause in the story, it's just one thing directly after another.
can u use full stops (periods) more? i was confused on when the sentences ended