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you never really got to know me

you never really got to know me

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rchelbritman By rchelbritman Updated Jun 22, 2011

my poetry collection.

LiZ-RoSe LiZ-RoSe Dec 20, 2010
I really like this!! Good work..a couple tip though, remember to seperate your 'to' from 'too' and put commas in to make it more effective.other than that, pretty good poem xD
rchelbritman rchelbritman Dec 20, 2010
@70svwcourtenee thanks it is a lot to cover, i may make it longer but i feel like ill mess it up.
courtneymo96 courtneymo96 Dec 20, 2010
this is really good, although i would like to read more detail, and a better attention getter. i like the poem alot though, keep it up :)