my poetry collection.
I really like this!! Good work..a couple tip though, remember to seperate your 'to' from 'too' and put commas in to make it more effective.other than that, pretty good poem xD
@70svwcourtenee thanks it is a lot to cover, i may make it longer but i feel like ill mess it up.
this is really good, although i would like to read more detail, and a better attention getter. i like the poem alot though, keep it up :)