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A Love Story

A Love Story

7.1K Reads 18 Votes 18 Part Story
MusicLover01 By MusicLover01 Completed

Victoria wasn't really looking for a relationship intill her friends pushed her to give it a try. She then meets Jasper in a unexpecting way. Jasper hasn't been in a relationship for a while and he is looking for that one...again. His last relationship ended terriably and he has been out of the game for a while. But then he met Victoria.  At first she didnt like him but she quickly began falling for him and he quickly began falling for her too. She reliezed that he is her Shining Night and Armor and they're soon together and can't leave eachother for one second, you could say they were perfect for eachother and think their relationship can survie anything. That's being put to the test when Jasper's ex comes back and tries to get Jasper. Now Victoria must fight to keep him. Will Victoria keep Jasper's heart or will his ex take it back?

CareeFreeGissay CareeFreeGissay Feb 18, 2012
This is really good, a few mistakes but nothing major and you shouldn't really space out the text but other than that this was fun to read :D
Gaironator Gaironator Apr 03, 2011
Pretty Good Start! Also How Come Each Text Is Separated By A lot of Spaces.