Only the Young

Only the Young

808 Reads 16 Votes 4 Part Story
Toni Murphy By lavitabelle Updated Mar 04, 2012

Things have gone downhill pretty fast for Ray Costa. She was and could probably be your average sixteen year old. Getting on with school work, aiming to get far in life. It wasn't as if she didn't have good parents, she did and they're parenting had worked for their other two children but it just didn't seem to sink well with Ray. Now Ray has done something bad, really bad. Bad enough for her to be sent away for good. Well until she's 18. Until then she's stuck in the Wright-Daley Reform School.

lavitabelle lavitabelle Dec 20, 2010
I'm really glad you guys I enjoyed it as much as I have enjoyed writing it. Keep a look out for chapter 2. I'm always looking for new character inspiration so if anyone would like to seem themselves in the story just message me! Oh and btw made it on the what's hot list! How awesome is that!?
anonymous94 anonymous94 Dec 20, 2010
You had a great introduction, and you kept my attention all the way through the chapter. The pace of the story was good, as was the writing.
                              
                              Good job! Voted (:
lavitabelle lavitabelle Dec 19, 2010
@omicool that was on purpose, her thoughts were a mess during the incident so i thought i would make that apparent by repeating some things. In a way that she was trying to convince herself of things. i'm glad you enjoyed it (:
lavitabelle lavitabelle Dec 18, 2010
@Rollingstone Thank you! Welcoem to wattpad btw and thanks for the comment. you made me smile x3
                              
                              @Sarasusu519 I'll upload ASAP.
Tatyana_Anderson96 Tatyana_Anderson96 Dec 18, 2010
This is really good, i love it! even though Rayne almost committed a murder, i still like her. I really want to know the details about what happened that night.... ohhh... plz upload soon 
Rollingstone Rollingstone Dec 18, 2010
This is really good. I'd love to read more soon, I haven't read many stories since Im quite new here but this gets me really interested and It all makes me want to be on her side really even if she did attempt murder. She seems so innocent, well done your a great writer :)