As you have finally settled in a dimension, you meet many new friends until a strange figure starts following you and eventually starts WANTING you.
Seems good so far. The only thing I would work on, is longer chapters :)
I just want to know who ACTUALLY reads a/n's? I do!
Chara: not me lol
Dude. The place is probably closed or something. Chill. It'll open tomorrow.
Sans: you need to get out of here
Me: never!! *gets a knife*
Sans: *gasp* it was you!
Vivika: *starts cutting cake* it was me What?
Sans: ..... *face palm*
Oh please , author , it's fine. Everyone has their own way of typing. That Im rubbish with grammer to
Oh someone likes me ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
I think ╚(ಠ_ಠ)=┐