Breaking Point

Breaking Point

4.1K Reads 575 Votes 17 Part Story
Hopemore By Hopemore Updated Oct 29, 2016

Abdullah Nasser, a determined perfectionist with superb grades and a guilty conscience, is caught in a brutal misunderstanding that leads the authorities to believe that he tried to kill someone, while his family slowly falls apart and his faith cracks under the pressure. 
Throughout it all Abdullah frequently wonders: where is God when he needs Him most? Because he's starting to doubt that He even exists.
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*Warning: This story will reference self harm, suicide and depression. I'll write 'Trigger warning' on chapters that include this content.

mnhlatif mnhlatif May 17
beautiful writing, smooth flow, you made me feel all the doubt, uncertainty and disbelief that Abdulllah felt and the mystery in this prologue... I HAVE GOT TO READ ON!
good-is-strength good-is-strength Nov 22, 2016
From the first sentence I am intrigued. It's been long since I found a book without cliché. I hope I made the right choice. I am liking it so far.
                              And your writing is flawless. Really good.
SalMannan SalMannan Jun 22, 2016
Good start. What about the other book you were writing? I can't remember what its called, the one with the princess who's trying to find the truth. Are you going to continue that one? Because I was really really liking that one.
ladyhoneysuckle ladyhoneysuckle Jun 22, 2016
I like where this is going. You're a brilliant writer. Can't wait for more!
KittyCrackers KittyCrackers Jun 22, 2016
I used to think you're writing was amazing but as I read more of your writing...
                              YOU'RE EVEN MORE AMAZING! Masha'Allah. 
                              Looking forward to this!
- - Jun 22, 2016
It was so intriguing and amazingly written!
                              Can't wait for more