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The Ex Wife ✔ (Under Editing)

The Ex Wife ✔ (Under Editing)

235K Reads 5K Votes 22 Part Story
blueeyedqueen1999 By blueeyedqueen1999 Completed

"Lisa thanks for coming in" Justin my ex said
"That would be Miss.Carter to you" I snap back to him

Mia Carter was once married to Justin Bryan Jenkins and had his kid. The kid he doesn't know about.
Mia is now going back to work with Justin.
Will he find out?
What will he do if he finds out?

I will edit as soon as my desktop is working again. Sorry for any mistakes or run on sentences

Aevy24 Aevy24 May 04
Angel 's age is confusing, shouldn't she be at least 1 years old.
kittycat1959 kittycat1959 Nov 11, 2016
So she going be her nanny and not work in  his company ?  Harsh !
kylecolins kylecolins Jun 25, 2016
I love this first chapter just wondering does he know about the baby that she is carrying
Stialyna Stialyna Sep 12, 2016
You're story is progressing well, but it could be improved by being consistent with the most basic writing conventions.
boliviakween boliviakween Oct 27, 2016
i do luv ur story but u can notice dat der's no comma in dis WHOLE sentence
bumblebee23298 bumblebee23298 Nov 12, 2016
@blueeyedqueen1999 just Incase you didn't notice, you wrote angle instead of angel