The Bad Boy Next Door

The Bad Boy Next Door

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♡ Vanity ♡ By vaniteux Updated Jul 07

Dear reader,


I'm Audrey,I'm your typical seventeen year old lives in a small village with my family. I was normal with my best friends.

But it all change when he moves in town..
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Audrey was just a normal fun loving 17 year old when a certain boy catches her eye.Will she be able get to know him? or will she be afraid when she discovers his deepest darkest secret?

© written by Vaniteux.

grlscum grlscum Feb 17
im just saying that self harm is a sensitive subject for some people like myself. i don't mean to hate and i actually like your book. I apologize if i offended you. self harm is just a sensitive topic for me and it was used very lightly here and it offended me.
vaniteux vaniteux Jan 24
done hating dear? get out of my book! i dont welcome idiotic people judging my books because this is my book if you got a probpem with it dont read simple. @grlscum
cieraishere cieraishere Dec 13, 2014
@MeganFinch @vaniteux that's what she was saying  get an editor it wasn't that bad :)
MeganFinch MeganFinch Jun 09, 2014
I'm afraid the grammar lets the story down. I also noticed the change in tense, I used to do it also but you should get an editor to avoid negative comments such as myself, apologies xx
jadey800 jadey800 Jun 07, 2014
And also there are a few spelling and grammar mistakes that could be edited.
jadey800 jadey800 Jun 07, 2014
The storyline is quite interesting, But I noticed you changed tenses. You used the word 'trudge' and then 'saw.' Other than it is quite an okay story