Mortal

Mortal

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isha By ellipcess Completed

He smiled, 
And so did she - closing her eyes, 
feeling the flutter of the leaves,
and the sound of the night.

She wished the boy with a crown of thorns had a heart of roses.

[HIGHEST RANKINGS: #86 in SS 08.09.2016 and #90 in SS 07.08.2016]

AGHHHHHH THANK YOU SO SO SO MUCH I LOVE YOU SO MUCH (AND I LOVE YOU MOST) AND SORRY IM NOT THE WORLD'S BEST EDITOR AND DONT WORRY IT WAS ALREADY BEAUTIFUL WITHOUT REVISION OKAY THANK YOU I AM SO HONORED *breaks down crying*
hammione hammione Nov 14
just like how she wants to beat you. black and blue and all that
the playlist slays
                              the summary slays
                              
                              everything about this slays!! cx
You've heard music by troye sivan?! Yay! You are already a fave person(to me) and I haven't even started the book yet!
hammione hammione Nov 14
I'm afraid so. You're entirely bonkers. But I'll tell you a secret. All the best people are
Great start. You have a lot of amazing lines in there. I also sense some poetic touch in your writing which is great. Love it :)