Show The Frowns

Show The Frowns

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oiram13 By oiram13 Updated Sep 21, 2011

"Show The Frowns" is a collection of poems which contains poems of burden, sadness, lonesome, heartbreaks and other emotions which either made us cry or made us realize something which is worth.

DrEaMeR7890 DrEaMeR7890 Aug 19, 2010
@oiram13 But,, The good part is,, I like it. (: You have a real talent there. ;)
DrEaMeR7890 DrEaMeR7890 Aug 05, 2010
You told me to comment,, so I am... Woow! Haha and please don't take this the wrong way,, but I wish I could be smarter so I could understand most of the words you used =P
Musicbreatheslife Musicbreatheslife Jul 12, 2010
Your use of words is amazing!! It gives the poem a very classy feel!! :)
Keara_Christine Keara_Christine Jul 07, 2010
That was really good. Especially for a poem, since I'm not so big on those. ^_^
jessielynnbaker jessielynnbaker Jul 07, 2010
i really like this!  thanks for shooting me a message and alterting me to your existence, because i loved this sonnet. i like your word choice.  most people don't have such a colorful vocabulary as you. keep up the good work! (:
Shade36t Shade36t Jul 06, 2010
That was really good. You obviously very talented. I agree with Rachelloves2write it had a really nice flow to it so yeah ... keep it up XD