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Lightness and Darkness

Lightness and Darkness

1K Reads 32 Votes 2 Part Story
oiram13 By oiram13 Updated Dec 18, 2010

Poems about lightness and darkness, which reflects the human's life, feelings and emotions through life.

LiZ-RoSe LiZ-RoSe Feb 20, 2011
This is simply beautiful. I like how you contrasted the two, then brought them together. Neat poem. :D
Auburn_Ivy Auburn_Ivy Dec 22, 2010
This is just . . . WOW!! 
                              I know ive said it be4 but i <3 how u capture emotions!!! 
                              I think this one has one it's place as my FAV!!!!
Deep4141 Deep4141 Dec 20, 2010
Various contrasts brought out in this poem....quite remarkably done !
Maria-Minou Maria-Minou Dec 20, 2010
this sounds really cool. I like the way you described darkness and light in two ways
TheEscapist TheEscapist Dec 19, 2010
Whoa..Like i said, powerful lol. I love the ending, sweet in a way. :)
ParadiseSurf ParadiseSurf Dec 19, 2010
Wow the way u describe life in ur perspective of good and bad is EXCELLENT!!! cool poems keep up the good work!