The Siren Who Wouldn't Sing

The Siren Who Wouldn't Sing

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Mel By abeautifulmelody_ Updated Aug 28, 2016

Once upon a time, in a land known as Nuvinia, there were two statements that all inhabitants knew to be fact. First, the two kingdoms of Nuvinia, Dral and Proghund, despised one another and would spend eternity at odds. Two, one should practice extreme caution when at sea, because the waters were infested with seductive sirens who would happily sing you to your grave. 

For a young siren named Vivian, there were also two statements that had always been accepted as fact. One, she must not reach the age of eighteen before mating with and drowning a human man, or else be cast out from her pod to fend for herself. And two, she could not kill someone, even a human, for it would tear her apart. 

But she has to try. Just twenty-eight days before her birthday, Vivian sets out to find her victim. A quick turn of events results in her being taken aboard first a ship captained by a handsome Dralian pirate and then the boat of the dashing Proghundese prince himself. In the days that follow, Vivian explores the human world and its inhabitants instead of searching for a victim as her family believes she is doing-and the more that she does, the more she resents what she must do in order to stay with them. 

As she becomes friends with the prince and the pirate, Vivian discovers that her true destiny is to follow her heart rather than please others. And if she's lucky, Vivian may even stop a deadly war during her journey to find where she truly belongs. 

AWESOME cover by @elphadora!!

  • adventure
  • boy
  • death
  • fantasy
  • fighting
  • girl
  • island
  • kingdom
  • love
  • medieval
  • mermaid
  • monster
  • ocean
  • pirate
  • prince
  • romance
  • sea
  • siren
  • swords
  • war
Meshaleah Meshaleah Nov 18, 2017
I don't think lying will help Vivian because what if she is asked to do it again
MollsieWallsie MollsieWallsie Aug 28, 2017
I'm wondering how the other sirens would know that she killed a man, anyways. Can't she just say she did it? Haha.
figrig123 figrig123 Jun 16, 2017
I'm getting a bad feeling, she's still naked and their drunk this can't end well
MollsieWallsie MollsieWallsie Aug 28, 2017
Ohh there's the explanation for Aiyana's clothes =P  I feel like that explanation should have come sooner, but I can see how that might mess with the pacing a bit.
MollsieWallsie MollsieWallsie Aug 06, 2017
I really love this concept and characters already =)  You did an excellent job with this first chapter, I'm hooked!
BreakfestIsthisWay BreakfestIsthisWay Mar 13, 2017
She's naked. They won't be offering the kind of food you want to eat.