Promise

Promise

9.5K Reads 1.9K Votes 50 Part Story
K By KittyFitzgerald Updated Oct 01

Saskia's whole life changed. Her brother, Liam, unexpectedly died. Everything she loved, cared for and enjoyed slowly faded away. Life was just an endless disappointment for her. 
  Until she met Leo.

For this only to be chapter one. Feel like i already kno soo much about her and i really like that this book is da bomb finma crack open chapter 2👍
Love the plot so far, I like the steady pulse throughout the chapter, it'd sound really great if you varied the sentence length once in a while (heh don't mind me xD). But really, great work! (:
FELIX_CULPA FELIX_CULPA Aug 12
Your book had such a good start! I can't believe I can relate to Sas so much? xD 
                              Can't wait to read the rest of the chapters~
serpentin3 serpentin3 Aug 28
Great work so far! You have a great grasp on your character's emotions. Keep it up!
DaiahD DaiahD Aug 15
Hey I read this story, it amazing so far. U are a really good writer, I just made my 3 chapter of u wanna read I think I did pretty good. And I would love to read more, keep going it's good so far. Bye!!😄
really like thissss, it's so unique and you're a great author. it's funny and witty, can't wait to read more!