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The Creature Inside

The Creature Inside

84.8K Reads 2.7K Votes 12 Part Story
Ashley By Abbi511 Completed

*****MATURE CONTENT***


Clara is a fiercely independent feisty woman of 20 who's not afraid to speak her mind and fight for what she wants.

She has one main problem;
Her brother Andrew is forever getting into trouble with the wrong people and she is left working her a$$ off with double shifts at her two jobs to bail him out.
Which hasn't left her any time for a social life in years, so she never met the right guy that can handle her temperament and is still a virgin.

One day Andrew really screws up and crosses Ricky, a gorgeous specimen of a man. Carla is left with taking drastic action and agrees to go with Ricky to save her brothers life. Not knowing what she's got herself into.......

Ritzy-Roo Ritzy-Roo May 12
I have helped my brother out a few times.... but would not do it if he had a problem and kept getting into trouble..
Ritzy-Roo Ritzy-Roo May 14
Please do not mistake my comment for being selfish, or uncaring. I love my brother with all my heart. But I wouldn't be doing him any good constantly bailing him out. Why should I work hard to live and be in debt cause he is irresponsible & won't grow up.
EveSlim EveSlim Sep 23, 2016
Even if he was my brother I would say no cause he needs to learn how ti take care if himself he shouldnt be depending on his little sibling and Im saying this from being a big sister to 3
EleniV83 EleniV83 Dec 06, 2016
If this was my brother, I'd beat his ass some more before packing....
chrysantheum11789 chrysantheum11789 Aug 26, 2016
I like your story very much!!!! What's your genre if you don't mind me asking???
EveSlim EveSlim Sep 23, 2016
Like they depend on me when my mom not here but yea This story is getting somewhere