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I'm In Love... With the Son of my Father's Murderer

I'm In Love... With the Son of my Father's Murderer

1.2K Reads 18 Votes 6 Part Story
xmasBell By xmasBell Updated Jan 25, 2011

Meet Tyler McCoy. He's only 19 years old, but he left Canada alone for a foreign country, leaving his family and his familiar lifestyle miles away. Could it be he's here for something? And when he gets into a relationship with Scarlett Avery, could it be that it is mainly built on lies and deceit? Afterall, no one truly knows who Tyler really is... And that includes Scarlett.

RamirezCindy RamirezCindy Jan 17, 2011
@xmasBell Scarlett is a strong girl who also has obstacles in her way. She reminds of a shy girl who becomes a heroine by the end of the story.
RamirezCindy RamirezCindy Jan 16, 2011
Wow! Amazing story. I don't even think there were any mistakes...
                              Tyler seems very...mysterious- and Dangerous. Yet, he's character is very intriguing. Scarlett? I like her. Why? She notices how Tyler is cute and everything but she still feels the need to avoid him... I enjoy Scarlett's character.
xmasBell xmasBell Jan 07, 2011
@SpiritedAway Thank you! I made it myself ^_^ And yeah, boys like Tyler are indeed rare. That's sad D: And thanks a lot for your comment, hun! ♥
SpiritedAway SpiritedAway Jan 06, 2011
First off, I love your story cover so much :)
                              Secondly a handshake!? I only wish boys were that nice, most boys at my school would greet me with a rude comment or a dopey joke, I'm glad Tyler's different.
                              Tyler's intriguing.
                              Great work :D
BlAckRosE7777777 BlAckRosE7777777 Dec 24, 2010
I don't like how she thinks so little of herself. It makes me angry. Congratulations :D You made me feel a strong emotion. Once you've done this, you know you've succeeded in trapping your reader. 
Ayoungwriter Ayoungwriter Dec 24, 2010
I really like this and I'm gonna vote. It is making me curious.