Computer Crush

Computer Crush

111K Reads 680 Votes 24 Part Story
Milcah By mil-e-cah101 Updated Jul 07, 2011

Annabelle, lost everything at the beginning of high school and when suddenly she starts emailing this guy and getting to know him everything starts to get better. from getting over heartbreaks and fixing up friendships.this guy just may be able to fix everything

sasha2501 sasha2501 Apr 06, 2014
I live the story plot, really. But you have a quite a few grammar mistakes
Neon_Meth Neon_Meth Oct 21, 2013
the stories good but I had to reread the flash back cos the grammer was bad and it didn't really make sense but it's good so far
DanielleEckers DanielleEckers Oct 15, 2013
I think your storyline is really cool but the grammar is pretty bad in parts. so maybe if you have time I would suggest going back and editing :)
ImJocelynnn ImJocelynnn Mar 01, 2013
Its awesome, but the grammer and sentence structures aren't that great. And, everything happened so fast. Slow down, give us a little more detail. But, Like i said, AWESOME story :) I know im going to enjoy this :D & i'll defenitely vote :)
mil-e-cah101 mil-e-cah101 Nov 14, 2010
@wolfiebaby16 thanks i hope it is :P im writing right now so yup thanks for reading and voting!
                              ~mil-e-cah101
gomezluvr gomezluvr Oct 28, 2010
lemme guess.. the email adress belongs to her bff well, her ex-bff?