The Proposal: Wicked Intentions (The Wattys2016)

The Proposal: Wicked Intentions (The Wattys2016)

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Jennifer By KatLover000 Updated Nov 24

The year is 1756. Catherine Hale is the daughter of a poor farmer in a small village. She is engaged to the blacksmith's son. Then one day, a wealthy man rides into town and her life changes. The man makes her parents an offer they cannot refuse. But all is not as it seems.

Short but sweet and gets straight to the point! I like it and I love how you portray the main characters.
VaughnOhara VaughnOhara Jun 25
So, I want to slap him. With a closed fist. And several rings on.
                              It's safe to say, for such a short chapter, you've managed to portray him successfully as a dominating and mysterious asshat.
EXAlexander EXAlexander Jul 26
Very nicely done introductory chapter.  There were a couple of grammar mistakes, but nothing major.
I like how straight to the point it was! He seems nice but idk. I hate her father lol he really slapped her like wtf! I feel like if I lived in times like those where women were to be seen and not heard, I'd be dead for my smart remarks. Nice start!
minkafox minkafox Aug 16
I find it sad that in some parts of the world, women are still treated this way😡😢
Lol you started with wooden bucket & ended with metal bucket