The Proposal: Wicked Intentions (The Wattys2016)

The Proposal: Wicked Intentions (The Wattys2016)

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Jennifer By KatLover000 Updated Nov 24, 2017

The year is 1756. Catherine Hale is the daughter of a poor farmer in a small village. She is engaged to the blacksmith's son. Then one day, a wealthy man rides into town and her life changes. The man makes her parents an offer they cannot refuse. But all is not as it seems.

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  • eroticromance
  • forcedmarriage
  • mature
  • romance
  • vampire
  • vampireromance
  • wattys2016
bored_and_afraid bored_and_afraid Nov 23, 2017
I'm glad i was born when I was because we would've had to square up.
TheTrueTerrydactyl TheTrueTerrydactyl Nov 24, 2017
okay, instead of saying "She" so much, try putting in "Catherine", because this is way too many pronouns, dammit!
TheTrueTerrydactyl TheTrueTerrydactyl Nov 24, 2017
you seem to have  a lot of start/stops in here, beginning sentences with she instead of trying to smooth it into one.
                              Take out the second "she" beginning, and make those two sentences one.
TheTrueTerrydactyl TheTrueTerrydactyl Nov 24, 2017
uh, these two dont go together.
                              why the hell would she kick the bucket after taking care to make sure it doesn't spill?
                              (also put a comma instead of a period before "but")
                              also, why "lets"? why not just say "let out a frustrated sigh"? makes it seem more present tense ^-^
I'm liking this book way too much. Don't listen to the pathetic haters.
Glenna1972 Glenna1972 Apr 25
This book sounds really interesting but I don’t want to start to read it till it’s finished. It has to have an ending. Please !