The Proposal: Wicked Intentions (The Wattys2016)

The Proposal: Wicked Intentions (The Wattys2016)

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Jennifer By KatLover000 Updated Nov 24

The year is 1756. Catherine Hale is the daughter of a poor farmer in a small village. She is engaged to the blacksmith's son. Then one day, a wealthy man rides into town and her life changes. The man makes her parents an offer they cannot refuse. But all is not as it seems.

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  • eroticromance
  • forcedmarriage
  • mature
  • romance
  • vampireromance
  • wattys2016
I'm glad i was born when I was because we would've had to square up.
okay, instead of saying "She" so much, try putting in "Catherine", because this is way too many pronouns, dammit!
you seem to have  a lot of start/stops in here, beginning sentences with she instead of trying to smooth it into one.
                              Take out the second "she" beginning, and make those two sentences one.
omggitsaya omggitsaya Jul 31
Lucky for me , I'm thin and my bones can handle heavy objects 😏
uh, these two dont go together.
                              why the hell would she kick the bucket after taking care to make sure it doesn't spill?
                              (also put a comma instead of a period before "but")
                              also, why "lets"? why not just say "let out a frustrated sigh"? makes it seem more present tense ^-^
I'd ask for the house to be burnt down with them still inside.🙄🙄🙄