DARK KILLS

DARK KILLS

4.5K Reads 1.3K Votes 22 Part Story
❤Jeanne Danielle❤ By zoyelle Updated 2 days ago

The safe serenity of the small town of Framlingham in the heart of England is shattered when a fifteen year old girl is found dead in the woods.

Little Annette Moreau's family moves to Framlingham after her parents divorce. It's a new and perfect world for her. But sometimes, evil always has its way. Nothing would ever have prepared Annette for the nightmare that awaits her in the town of Fram.

A killer runs free and has to be stopped, but who is he?

Highest ranking: #98  in Mystery/Thriller. 20/10/2016

youcancallmeaka youcancallmeaka Oct 17, 2016
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                              No grammatical errors and that's a great thing! The descriptions were good but I felt you could have described it better like what did he hit her with! Other than that the chapter was great and the last few paragraphs got me on the edge of my seat
feignedsouls feignedsouls Oct 15, 2016
Beautiful!! It starts off very gripping and heart capturing and then trickles off. The main point I love is ur descriptions, which is a huge part of writing ♡
gizolata7997_eng gizolata7997_eng Oct 20, 2016
Descriptions are really great 😻 I felt cold though I'm home...
lonelydandelion lonelydandelion Oct 15, 2016
Why would you be walking through the woods at night women!!!?
PauDickson PauDickson Oct 22, 2016
Wow! So much action in just the prologue. Great job. I loved it. I'm really intrigued. You're such a creative writer, it was sort of like I was watching play right before my eyes. I love how you created the suspense and built up on it. Can't wait to read more.
Hope_Writes Hope_Writes Oct 19, 2016
This was a really great way to capture the reader's attention. Can't wait to read more!