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Silver

Silver

5.9K Reads 344 Votes 22 Part Story
A.W. By AlexRubato Updated 3 days ago

"The dark, ruffled hair on his scalp moved slightly with the winter wind. There was an aura of power around him, a sense of cold authority that made my earlier urge to run reemerge. His face was the color of alabaster, paler than even my cream colored complexion. The highlighting color made his cheekbones stand out starkly against the shadowed hollows beneath them. It illuminated a sharp jaw as well, looking taut enough to have been carved out of stone. Black eyes contrasted sharply against his skin as they regarded the men around me.

It wasn't necessarily his posture or beauty that struck me the most, but the expression on his face. It was void of all emotion, too icy to pass for bored. It frightened me more than anything else about him.

A sharp gasp echoed in the stillness and it wasn't until the man holding me harshly forced my head downwards again, that I realized it was mine. 

There was a moment of compact silence."

 #choco
                              
                              Wow, you're really good xD. It was as if a movie was playing in my head. I like the flow and the cliffhanger whatttt. Your descriptions and grammar are on point. 
                              
                              It's been a while since I've read Vampire books so I'm pretty excited about this! ^-^
 #choco
                              
                              Wow, you're really good xD. It was as if a movie was playing in my head. I like the flow and the cliffhanger whatttt. Your descriptions and grammar are on point. 
                              
                              It's been a while since I've read Vampire books so I'm pretty excited about this! ^-^
Holy sht I read this story years ago but u took it down TwT I'm so glad u decided to rewrite it because it's one of the BEST stories I've ever read 💥
Dany1908 Dany1908 Mar 16
 #Choco
                              Well what i can say, the description and words use are splendid. Easy to visualize the scenes. I haven't read a book in vampire genre from so good time, but your detailing, specially in the italic part mesmerized me. I like the mystery that surrounds the prologue
candlesundermoonlite candlesundermoonlite Jun 17, 2016
I love your style of writing. So many details.. I love it! Please update?
blare_lina blare_lina Mar 03
I really liked the opening. The words used were enchanting itself. The cliffhanger at end was also good. It was most like how a fantasy /mystery book should start! Keep writing :)