113K Reads 7.5K Votes 52 Part Story
A.W. By AlexRubato Updated Jan 03

Top rating #14 (20/11 2017)

"When I was left at Miss Rodrick's Boarding School for the Talented Young, with nothing but seven summers of life and a halo of raven curls, the sunshine haired Lena Winther was the first to smile and take my hand. And she never let go. 
Not when the monsters, that had crawled out from sewers and castles and dark alleys to roam the planet, wrecked governments all over the world and took their seats for themselves. Not when Miss Rodrick turned out to be Miss Samson, a woman who dealt in the smuggling of young girls rather than protecting them from being kidnapped from their beds at night."

The immortals' reign has lasted over a decade, leaving the world in shambles and humankind enslaved. Aurelia McGregor - rebel daughter and fierce advocate for the vampires' imminent demise - has spent the majority of her life stowed away at the boarding school of a money-crazed child smuggler. After spending ten years mourning the loss of her best friend, she finds herself facing the same unfair destiny: standing in a ballroom of immortals, being auctioned off as a blood slave. 
And so begins the tale of hatred and fear and fury. Of friendship and lust and shifting alliances. Of rebellion and courage and love. Of a girl reclaiming a life that's never been her own.

  • fantasy
  • featured
  • immortals
  • romance
  • supernatural
  • vampire
  • vampires
reaweiger reaweiger Jun 20, 2017
I was under the impression that this prologue couldn't possibly become more beautiful, but then you go and turn it into another absolute masterpiece. Wattpad doesn't support my wish to leave about a trillion votes, so - naturally - I had to remove my vote just so I could vote again. <3
teen5sos teen5sos Oct 10, 2017
                              wow. this was intense. i like how you increase the suspicion and tension with this paragraph.
KathrynLauren KathrynLauren Jul 10, 2017
Holy wow! Your descriptions are just as amazing as Rebecca's 💕
Azeemah13 Azeemah13 Nov 04, 2017
                              First I apologize for my late criticism. I could feel the emotions coming from her. It was very well written for a preamble which is very amazing. A little bit of punctuation error here and there, though all in all, very intriguing
untamedchaos- untamedchaos- Oct 14, 2017
                              Okay...I have nothing at all to say. I'm speechless. This is such an amazing beginning. Words can not describe how much I loved this. Your descriptions are amazing. There is nothing I could find to critique. 
                              Awesome job!!
KathrynLauren KathrynLauren Jul 10, 2017
Well girl! I have no idea where to start because I am such awe of your beautiful and poetic descriptions! Such an awe inducing opening 💕 pretty sure I am already in love! 😍