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Silver

Silver

12.8K Reads 752 Votes 34 Part Story
A.W. By AlexRubato Updated 6 days ago

"The dark, ruffled hair on his scalp moved slightly with the winter wind. There was an aura of power around him, a sense of cold authority that made my earlier urge to run reemerge. His face was the color of alabaster, paler than even my cream colored complexion. The highlighting color made his cheekbones stand out starkly against the shadowed hollows beneath them. It illuminated a sharp jaw as well, looking taut enough to have been carved out of stone. Black eyes contrasted sharply against his skin as they regarded the men around me.

It wasn't necessarily his posture or beauty that struck me the most, but the expression on his face. It was void of all emotion, too icy to pass for bored. It frightened me more than anything else about him.

A sharp gasp echoed in the stillness and it wasn't until the man holding me harshly forced my head downwards again, that I realized it was mine. 

There was a moment of compact silence."

-xyna- -xyna- Mar 23
 #choco
                              
                              Wow, you're really good xD. It was as if a movie was playing in my head. I like the flow and the cliffhanger whatttt. Your descriptions and grammar are on point. 
                              
                              It's been a while since I've read Vampire books so I'm pretty excited about this! ^-^
reaweiger reaweiger Jun 20
I was under the impression that this prologue couldn't possibly become more beautiful, but then you go and turn it into another absolute masterpiece. Wattpad doesn't support my wish to leave about a trillion votes, so - naturally - I had to remove my vote just so I could vote again. <3
Holy wow! Your descriptions are just as amazing as Rebecca's 💕
anilod12 anilod12 May 02
I think this prologue is very well written.
                              You left us wanting to know more about the blonde girl, how/ why was she sold.
                              The ending was spot on because right now I feel like I need to read more to find out about this raven haired girl whose about to be sold as well.
                              Great job ☺
-xyna- -xyna- Mar 23
 #choco
                              
                              Wow, you're really good xD. It was as if a movie was playing in my head. I like the flow and the cliffhanger whatttt. Your descriptions and grammar are on point. 
                              
                              It's been a while since I've read Vampire books so I'm pretty excited about this! ^-^
Well girl! I have no idea where to start because I am such awe of your beautiful and poetic descriptions! Such an awe inducing opening 💕 pretty sure I am already in love! 😍