Too Quiet

Too Quiet

6.4K Reads 518 Votes 19 Part Story
ee-man By Eman-AQ Updated Mar 26

In which an unseeing boy and an unhearing girl receive the opportunity to regain their newly-lost senses.
                
But with the help of a mad man, of course.
                                                 

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Hello, I am from the Unicorn Awards and I was just reading your summary and thought that it would be an interesting book to enter into our contest. Your thoughts? Have a nice day or night!😘🦄
 #MarshmallowBC. This is a great start, I personally didn't notice any changes you should make or errors. i like how you described everything, how her body looked and what she was feeling, it made your story great.
Addie_Belle Addie_Belle Apr 30
 #marshmallowb
                              Your imagery is absolutely beautiful, and I could definitely picture what was going on! There weren't any grammar errors that I noticed. The only thing I would fix is to try and incorprote the time frame into the writing.
So far, the beginning of the story good . Your description is amazing! Although there are a few grammatical errors, it seems nice. The title is also alright.  I feel like you could have added some dialogue but interesting nonetheless :) #marshmallowbc
Rukky360 Rukky360 Mar 29
 #Marshmallowbc
                              
                              Faith is an interesting name and an interesting character. I love your descriptions about faiths environment it has been well detailed. You did well in this chapter I'm hooked. Good job keep it up
Already have good vibes about this book tbh🤷🏽‍♀️