Too Quiet

Too Quiet

7.1K Reads 542 Votes 19 Part Story
ee-man By Eman-AQ Updated Mar 26

In which an unseeing boy and an unhearing girl receive the opportunity to regain their newly-lost senses.
                
But with the help of a mad man, of course.
                                                 

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Hello, I am from the Unicorn Awards and I was just reading your summary and thought that it would be an interesting book to enter into our contest. Your thoughts? Have a nice day or night!😘🦄
 #MarshmallowBC. This is a great start, I personally didn't notice any changes you should make or errors. i like how you described everything, how her body looked and what she was feeling, it made your story great.
Addie_Belle Addie_Belle Apr 30
 #marshmallowb
                              Your imagery is absolutely beautiful, and I could definitely picture what was going on! There weren't any grammar errors that I noticed. The only thing I would fix is to try and incorprote the time frame into the writing.
So far, the beginning of the story good . Your description is amazing! Although there are a few grammatical errors, it seems nice. The title is also alright.  I feel like you could have added some dialogue but interesting nonetheless :) #marshmallowbc
Rukky360 Rukky360 Mar 29
 #Marshmallowbc
                              
                              Faith is an interesting name and an interesting character. I love your descriptions about faiths environment it has been well detailed. You did well in this chapter I'm hooked. Good job keep it up
-xanaxdaddy -xanaxdaddy Sep 18
Already have good vibes about this book tbh🤷🏽‍♀️