Hello! This is a story about Sophie and Fitz, the beginning is sorta boring but I promise it will get better!
This is a cute story! <3 I just have one problem. I don't meant to offend you or hate in any way, but you might want to check your grammar because it makes it a little hard to read. Thanks! :)
I don't want to be mean or anything but it is called a leapmaster
Just to let you know the "teleporter" is the leap-master 500
The idea behind this is great but I feel like it needs a lot of work. Love how cute you make Fitz in this chapter tho 😍
Try to leave out the language please. I hate fanfic filled with that stuff and I really like this. Don't ruin it by adding junk