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BREATHING FIRE. [Completed]

BREATHING FIRE. [Completed]

21.8K Reads 3.1K Votes 27 Part Story
Heather Morris By Heatheranno Completed

Two teens are transported into a primitive world.

Fiercely strong Andie, and her geeky little brother Dylan, are thrust into the world of Roan. 

Their Valekin hosts seem to think they were sent by the Gods in order to bring peace, but the Gods are not what they seem.

Now it will take all of Andie's fighting skills and Dylan's considerable intelligence for them to stay alive long enough to find their way home.  

For as the Valekins focus on their Graecore enemies; a tyrannical madman secretly plots to raise a massive army of dead soldiers that will annihilate everyone.  
The only thing he needs to complete the spell is Dylan's blood.

While Dylan comes of age through terror and tragedy Andie struggles to protect him and deal with her growing feelings for prince Hagen.
Feelings that could cost them both, their lives.

Beautiful cover by @Sapphire_2721. Check out all her amazing work.

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  • badassfemale
  • chemistry
  • comingofage
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  • death
  • fantasy
  • gods
  • magic
  • romance
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MCShaw2018 MCShaw2018 Apr 17
I liked the hook at the beginning. I felt time stand still for Andie, but once she moved on I was carried on with her.  I'm looking forward to reading more.
rhythmchyc rhythmchyc May 17
 #commentsquad I am enraptured by this beginning. You’ve got a shocking ocurrence followed by a supernatural response! Perfect!
That's what usually happens 
                              
                              I tell my kids : when it's flesh vs. steel, steel always wins
NorthFrost NorthFrost May 21
Hmmmmmm this dude is a ninja or something- how did he not get hurt getting hit by a car???
sfannin21 sfannin21 May 02
GREAT START!!!  I can’t wait to find out what happens! #commentsquad
NorthFrost NorthFrost May 21
Good description— is that what he’s guarding??? This creepy gate?