BREATHING FIRE. [Completed]

BREATHING FIRE. [Completed]

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Heather Morris By Heatheranno Completed

Two teens are transported into a primitive world.

Fiercely strong Andie, and her geeky little brother Dylan, are thrust into the world of Roan. 

Their Valekin hosts seem to think they were sent by the Gods in order to bring peace, but the Gods are not what they seem.

Now it will take all of Andie's fighting skills and Dylan's considerable intelligence for them to stay alive long enough to find their way home.  

For as the Valekins focus on their Graecore enemies; a tyrannical madman secretly plots to raise a massive army of dead soldiers that will annihilate everyone.  
The only thing he needs to complete the spell is Dylan's blood.

While Dylan comes of age through terror and tragedy Andie struggles to protect him and deal with her growing feelings for prince Hagen.
Feelings that could cost them both, their lives.

Beautiful cover by @Sapphire_2721. Check out all her amazing work.

  • action
  • adventure
  • badassfemale
  • battle
  • bullyingawareness
  • chemistry
  • comingofage
  • completed
  • death
  • fantasy
  • gods
  • magic
  • redheads
  • romance
  • sciencefiction
  • shapeshifters
  • ultimatecontest
  • vikings
  • youngadult
  • zombies
rhythmchyc rhythmchyc May 17
 #commentsquad I am enraptured by this beginning. You’ve got a shocking ocurrence followed by a supernatural response! Perfect!
NorthFrost NorthFrost May 21
Hmmmmmm this dude is a ninja or something- how did he not get hurt getting hit by a car???
NorthFrost NorthFrost May 21
Good description— is that what he’s guarding??? This creepy gate?
rhythmchyc rhythmchyc May 17
Wow. This was a riveting opening chapter. Your characters are tangible. Your setting is palpable. The emotions are vivid. Your writing style is inviting. And I cannot wait to read the next chapter. Kudos! #commentsquad
NorthFrost NorthFrost May 21
What kinda FBI stuff is this guy into??? And why didn’t he get hurt when the car hit him?!
Okayy now I'm more scared. Please tell me this won't go how I think it'll go.