The New Me

The New Me

6.9K Reads 87 Votes 12 Part Story
Harribo By Harribo Updated Sep 22, 2010

I fell in love with my brothers best friend... Oops.

erinx16 erinx16 Apr 28, 2010
This is amazing! I love it so much! I am definitely fanning you. You could always return the favor :)
caoxistt caoxistt Feb 22, 2010
This is very well written, just a few grammatical errors though like capatilization. =)
Sweeti Sweeti Feb 20, 2010
hey
                              
                              this is really awesome :D luv it
                              
                              oh and can u read my story please? no worries and btw i didnt just write this and not read ur story lol
                              
                              cant wait to read the rest >.<
Harribo Harribo Feb 10, 2010
lol, i used that timing because shes english, so shes a bit different than the rest, she hopfully stands out a bit!
wendyandpeterpan wendyandpeterpan Feb 10, 2010
nice job! (:
                              although in America nobody uses thirteen-o-five,
                              they use 1:05 pm ;; (:
                              i love your descriptions too!
                              :D but i feel as if this is going a bit too slow,
                              maybe speeding it up a bit would make
                              it more intresting! :D
Harribo Harribo Feb 07, 2010
@alySon_nOel_is_BesT: lol. I keep uploading bits onto it every day i come on, so keep checking to see if there are more pages!