I fell in love with my brothers best friend... Oops.
This is amazing! I love it so much! I am definitely fanning you. You could always return the favor :)
This is very well written, just a few grammatical errors though like capatilization. =)
this is really awesome :D luv it
oh and can u read my story please? no worries and btw i didnt just write this and not read ur story lol
cant wait to read the rest >.<
lol, i used that timing because shes english, so shes a bit different than the rest, she hopfully stands out a bit!
nice job! (:
although in America nobody uses thirteen-o-five,
they use 1:05 pm ;; (:
i love your descriptions too!
:D but i feel as if this is going a bit too slow,
maybe speeding it up a bit would make
it more intresting! :D
@alySon_nOel_is_BesT: lol. I keep uploading bits onto it every day i come on, so keep checking to see if there are more pages!